Wait... do I have no notes?
This reader's first page is so good...
Happy Friday! Today’s reader first page is SO GOOD YOU GUYS! Seriously, I got to the end of the sample and I was like I HAVE NO NOTES?
That has never happened before.
I managed to dig deep to come up with EXACTLY ONE note to help the writer take this page to the next level, but I’m not kidding, if this had popped up in my inbox back when I was a literary agent’s assistant, I would have had no choice but to keep reading to see what happens next. In fact, now that I’m thinking about it, I’m not even sure if my note makes the entry better so, if you disagree, be sure to let the writer know in the comments so they can decide whether or not they want to change it.
I hope you all enjoy it as much as I did! And, as always, if you’re interested in submitting a page for me to crit, feel free to DM me on this app. I have a bit of a backlog at the moment, but I’m (slowly!) making my way through all the entries. Thank you so much for your patience!
The Twenty-Seven Club
I’ve always been a little superstitious.
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